Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Haikai fun and games

Terry, at http://soupgirls.typepad.com/knittingtheblues/2008/07/not-haiku-haika.html started a Haikai - sort of a poetry game. And Lucia http://rhymeswithfuchsia.blogspot.com/ passed it on to me.

Steam heated
Lightning splits dark skies
Dramatic summer storms.

Winds howl through the leaves
Bird clutching branches tight.

Clouds dance in circles
Clean laundry snaps on the line
Warm rain falls in sheets

Blue skies brighten the day
Time to head to the beach

Sparkling blue-green wave
Zips me shoreward at top speed
The world's best thrill ride

Except for that night
with Bacchus in the woods

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OK, who wants the next verse?

6 comments:

  1. Oooo, you'll be a tough act to follow!

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  2. great addition....i liked the imagaery in the others, but your verse made me smile :)

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  3. I'll take it.

    The leaves that tickled
    Green and cool against our skin
    Oh to be there now.

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  4. HAHAHAHAHA! Roxie, you are a girl after my own heart!

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  5. I know which verse you wrote!

    I'll pass on this one although I'd love to do it. I'm so so far behind on everything in my life right now except grandson snuggling.

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